Harry wasn't a normal boy. As a matter of fact he was not as normal as it is possible to be. (Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets by J.K Rowling, Page 8)
Harry, on the other hand, was small and skinny, with brilliant green eyes and jet black hair which was always untidey. (Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets by J.K Rowling, Page 9) This describes the personality in Harry potter, and what he looks like. In my opinion of Harry's personality, he seems strong and heroic because he seems to help save the day in different parts of the book. Like right now he is being heroic because Harry is dealing with the fact he is being blamed for the mysterious things going on in the castle. Through our this book they meet new events of danger but in the end they still find a way to save the day.
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ReplyDeleteI liked many things about your blog and they really stiood put to me such as how you used many descriptive words ( brilliant green eyes and jet black hair) I also like how when you said Harry was heroic, you backed it up with evidence from your thoughts and the text. My only advice is to possibly use less commas. Take a breather, use a period. It will make it easier to write and easier for the reader to read. Great work otherwise!
ReplyDeleteI read this book years ago, and forgot some key points from it. You summed the book up nicely, so I could get nore of an idea of what the book was about. The video you choose also added a good visual to connect with the descriptive words you used. My only suggestion would be to think about changing the font or colours you use to make it easier to read.
ReplyDeleteI personally love all the Harry Potter books, you described the book really well, and I love all the detail you put in. :)
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